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Can money buy everything ?

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  Can money buy everything。 ?


  朱欣怡(高中直升2班)


  I’m absolutely sure that mon。ey can’t buy happiness.That’s because we can’t fail to realize that money is the roots of all evils.


  Such is human nature that everyone likes money becausenobody can live witho。ut money. In spite of this, mone。y can’t be paid i。nexchange for happiness not only because happiness is valuable bu。t also becausemoney is not the thing that can be used to do everything. Though we can buyfood and clothing wit。h money, it’s imposs。ible to buy happin。ess becausehappiness is so honorable that we can only create it by o。urselves.


  One day, you will be too old to walk and then it’stime for you to look back upon your past. Definitel。y, you。’ll r。ealize howimportant your health i。s and that health me。ans happiness. I don’t think you canbuy health or happiness with your money. If you want。 to keep fit, you have towork out. If you want to keep happy, you have to have a cozy env。ironment. Very。often, mone。y alone can’t do that.


  Money is something, but not everything.


  Teacher’s comments:


  This is。 a composition in the Mid-termExamination. The writer sets out by pointing out that money can’t buy happiness,after。 which she further explains to us that money is the root cause of allevils. She also analyses why mo。ney can’t be used in。 exchange for such things ashealth。 or happiness. The article ends with th。e conclusion: Money is som。ething,but not everything.


  The whole passage is filled with so manybeautiful expressions that we cannot fail to notice. Reasoning is also onestrong point to make this article the one that stands out in a thousand. ZhuXinyi is such a student, anxious to learn and good at learning. That’s whatother students should learn from.


  Wu Rongming (吴荣铭)




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